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Feb 2010
I crave your touch.
Just rub my nose.
Show me I am loved.
Just give me a pat.
Placing my muzzle under their fingers,
I wander around to different hands
Like a dog reprimanded
Looking for validation.
nefeli dikaiou suggested that I reverse the order of this poem. I like it both ways. I also changed the word "need" to "crave".
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