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locked rooms

i'll tell you what's fucked up about society a man in a room filled with women is excited he is checking every one of them out, his eyes searching for the one with the biggest boobs and the ones with the big ass, his eyes scan the pretty faces for the sparkling eyes and by the end,he's convinced that he's in love with the girl with the perfect smile. he is quick to point out their flaws, one of them has a button nose and someone has acne scars on her face one of them happens to be taller than him and another one a different race. he is excited,he is aroused, he wants to get lucky, he want to make new friends by the end of the night. in the locked room, he wants to have a time that only vodka can make him remember a woman in a room filled with men is terrified. she buttons up her shirt till she can feel it choking her. she covers up because she doesn't want them staring at the bits of skin exposed. across the room, she sees a man winking at her and quietly rubbing himself. she desperately looks for a safe space, a familiar face, she looks for somebody from the locked room who can save the day. the men slowly encircle her and mentally undress her and with every item of clothing they remove, she becomes more of an object. she is anxious,she wants to run for her life,she just wants to make it home safely by the end of the night. the locked room is a paradise to one and hell for another
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andwhentheshipsails
18 / F
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Written by
andwhentheshipsails
18 / F
Published
Jul 23, 2017
Lines·Words
34·277
Notes

this is actually a spoken word poem. i have been experimenting with new styles of writing since the past few weeks and this is one of the products

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#dark#deep#poetry#misogyny#patriarchy#rape#confined#locked#rooms#men
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