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Rachel Brainard
Poems
May 2012
Time
fast
slow
never stopping
always going
can we catch it
without slowing?
on the face that's always
glowing
can we pass it without
growing?
at times we feel like
it is towing
us behind it
never knowing
what it is that lies ahead.
here it comes it's always
beating
bringing laughter
sometimes weeping
wanting you to think it's
leading
to a hand that's always
feeding
your sore heart that's ever
bleeding
but you never are content.
now it's here it's got you
thinking
looking sly with tempting
winking
and your heart is ever
sinking
down into a black abyss.
and your heart is always
leaking
βcross the pane your blood is
streaking
yet you still are always
seeking
something else to fill that void.
In the sunset you can
see it
all creation 'round you
be it
hope inside begins to grow.
you know inside you know
for sure
you know that you have found
the cure
so you answer that tugging
lure
knowing that it will
endure
forever and all time.
This is a piece I wrote quite awhile ago. I know it needs some changing, but I'm not sure how or what. Any feedback/critique is greatly appreciated!
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Rachel Brainard
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