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Everything.

by ximri

i would compare you to a rose but my english teacher said that poets shouldn't use that metaphor too much so i'll compare you to winter, or an overcast sky ill compare you to every heart break, heart heavy back breaking sob i would ever take illnesses and bone breaks but we know it's not you if i can't use roses then what metephor is left to make? in the end there's nothing i can say that could show you who you are to me, or you, or friends afar but one thing i can say that can make it clearer is that you are finer than every single star and maybe that is just as over used like roses and mars and drunk kisses at underground dive bars but you ? what are you ? you must be everything.
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