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A Pleasing Setting

by jack-mandala

It was an overcast night. The Moon cast an illumination across the gray sky which created an unusual sense of contentment. As I was dozing off on the back of the boat, I zoned in on the constant ripples of the bay, containing a zig-zagged reflection of the architecture posted above it. It was consistent. The small waves. Some looked like they were constantly chasing the boat, but could never catch up. This awakened my senses. It looked as if the other ruffles were trapped under the navy blue blanket, yearning to break through the film by gliding in arbitrary directions. It was as if God was attempting to divulge some enlightenment I desperately needed. It was as if I had some connection to the seemingly near pitch-black setting. And it came at an instant. The ripples either followed the boat, or went off in their own directions. Our lives can be compared to ripples in a bay. We have two choices. Attempt to fill someone else's shoes, or make your own. The constant chase towards the boat represents our desire to change ourselves to someone else- it won't produce the result we desire. The other ripples make their own paths. Some gaining so much momentum, they become waves, crashing to shore with a bang. This is the result of creating our own lifestyle, based on our own ideas of happiness and success. Not all will make it to shore, but the ones that do sail in the path their own heart desires.
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Written by
jack-mandala
21 / M
Published
Jul 8, 2017
Time
2m
Notes

But then again it's just some damn waves

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#happiness#deep#thoughts#knowledge#god#philosophy#nature#scenary
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