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(need help with this)

from the flat, scorched fields of Nebraska to the rugged, snowy tops of Alaska we danced a jig - no, a rap swaying beautifully to the beat of a one-two step loving and fearing and trusting and listening Threads twisted and crossed until a beautiful know came into view, untying impossible. Ups and downs and a deluge of life produced permanent stains on the separate strings playing a harmony never equaled or paralleled. It began as a single note and quickly progressed to chords and talented fingerpicking. A unique song that echoes  off peaks, across the plains, to the valley. And life came again separating the melodies tearing them apart. And they screak in protest knowing that they will play together again and decorate the terrain with joy. Memories alone let them spread their wings and SOAR
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Written by
rachel-brainard
American
Published
May 17, 2012
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35·137
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This one is a very rough draft that I would really like some feedback on.  I still haven't come up with a title.  Please give suggestions.

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