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I can't feel my face when i'm with you.

by VipJo19

The music beating in the damp dark room made her spin in half circles. Her hips swung side to side as her arms lifted into the air. The glint of jewelry sparkling in the dim lighting of the packed space. A soft smile, lips curled just at the edges with eyes closed to the world around her. Dark auburn locks hung past her shoulders in loose waves. By the gods above and below she was a lovely sight. Those who's eyes fell and lingered about her frame watched in admiration. Thick thighs and strong shoulders rippling under soft brown skin, exposed by the strapless tank she wore. Men tried to pull her into a dance of grinding hips and over-reaching touches. Women watched carelessly, few approached her. Always managing to slip away from the heavier petting she would drag the ladies who she saw staring with desire. Enticing as she was few recognized what she was; a deceiver of fools, a heartbreaker. With her pretty smiles and soft eyes. A light press of lips against the shell of your ear, a warm hand just grazing against heated skin, and a laugh that has your heart beating frantically. Soft as a dream kisses just as sweet. She is the best thing you will ever have, touch, feel, breath. She sinks into the earth as the sun rises in the east. Never to be seen.
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Written by
VipJo19
27 / Non-binary
For You?
Written by
VipJo19
27 / Non-binary
Published
Jun 28, 2017
Time
2m
Notes

Yeees, you have seen the title somewhere before. This poem (??) was inspired by the Weeknd's Can't Feel My Face

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#jo#writesagain#love#lust#admiration#music#theweeknd
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