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Rain

The gloomy dark clouds in the sky That brought sadness into your eye coldness that made your heart suffer which made you nothing but bitter Let the heavens befall its rain So that I could feel your true pain And share these burden your keeping with thy heart that only knows caring All my attempts might be futile But mind this, there's a juvenile Patiently waiting till world's end for your agonized heart to mend
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nathaniel-cortes
Filipino
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Written by
nathaniel-cortes
Filipino
Published
May 9, 2012
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This is my first poem so i believe the flow of words and idea is quite awkward to read. So feel free to comment for the betterment of my future poems. Thank you

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