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The Point of No Return

His life with her has been a struggle, things aren't the same anymore no time to cuddle. Their relationship was a disaster following the aftermath, nothing could be fix that was left on their path. Who's was at fault no one to blame or charge, however as they see it their love was demolish by and large. Her accusation and jealousy was pushed on him with remarkable strength, this dilemma carried on to an unbelievable length.  Their hearts and mind exhausted and both were hurt, it seems they've gone to far and can't revert. There was nothing the both can do; no gratification, this can not go on; their need for help was sought with desperation. A love they shared with hate for one another on what grounds, people wouldn't listen they just turn around. Lost and nowhere to turn; isolated from one another with eyes of tears, with two bleeding hearts pierced  with a couple of spears. Difficult to cling on to each other with time and space, not knowing that their relationship was a total disgrace. Deep inside the ember of love glowing keeping them alive, hoping and praying their love will revive. Not allowing her love to surface while grasping on to her superbia, taking his breath away with signs claustrophobia. Struggling with little or no effort to makeup, with concerns of the inevitable of another breakup. A love with no compassion only sorrow,  a postponement until tomorrow. As for now this relationship is adjourn, perhaps this love of their as gone to the point of no return.
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sebastian-perez
Mexican
Published
May 4, 2012
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