The way she looks at me is too striking Piercing blue eyes engage in silent talks And to her mind I've taken a liking I hope and pray for the chance to trade walks I want to know her heart so deep and true To lay with her is the greatest present And to hold her wipes away all my dark blue Her smile alone is gorgeous and pleasant Unlike most roses her stem has no thorn Her red pedals reflect utmost beauty For those against her heart I have great scorn Her soul blossoms with no hatred to see I will walk with her to the end of time And will recite to her my poems and rhyme
This is the first sonnet I have ever written and I am seeking advice and insight. :)