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espaic09
Poems
May 2017
mosh
Manic energy
Heads ******* banging
Aggressive freedom of the senses
Happiness plus hatred
liberation of this pent up energy
Double kick bass loudly, sound breaking
Fast paced high squealing notes
Stop.
Down breaks the hellish tempo
Itβs time to smash faces,
Break bones in many places
A circular ritual of anger and sweat.
A trotting stampede of mindless freaks
All of them a ball of feelings hard like bricks
Surprise!
Concussion blast
Downed metal head comrade
Near a ****** foldable chair
Bleeding through his brain dome
Coughing asking for a still
memento of himself
Music halts and dust settles.
Uno, dos, tres, cuatro
Next title cueing
Freaks all cheering
Smells like ****, blood and sweat drippings
Feedback through the amps.
wall of death opens briskly
all hell breaks loose
Feral eyes moving quickly
Our Viking hearts
Fight for dignity
Or die honorably
valkiries above the mosh pit
and a glimpse of Odin
Hammer smashed face.
club swung to my back
Whiplash.
I woke up in my backyard.
Sore back, ribs broken
And a beer in my hand.
Hell of a night man
wrote while in college.
Written by
espaic09
Canovanas, PR
(Canovanas, PR)
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