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Brighid

Maybe you dreamt of a flower

Something soft and small

And hoped it would be enough

That it loved you back

 

You almost named me after your favourite:

A small, sweet, delicate flower

Which climbs high and grows strong

But you changed your mind when you saw me

 

The name you gave me is no less beautiful

And I hope it’s still a testament to my person

The songs I sing for you are works of poetry;

All your old favourites

 

The love I offer you is endless

But maybe the idea of it wasn’t enough for you

To clear the skies enough

And end the monsoon season

 

I remember dancing with her in the rain

Clothes soaked through,

A small child,

I couldn’t see the irony of it all

 

The freckles that come with the sun

Remind me of you, remind me I’m yours

I think I’m still climbing

But I’m not sure I’m as strong as you’d hoped

 

I hope I didn’t let you down, that day.

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Written by
tommy-1
22 / F / English
Published
May 1, 2017
Lines·Words
25·169
Notes

the name Brighid is of Celtic origin and is commonly understood to mean 'strong'. The Celtic symbol for father daughter tells the story of Brighid who sat close to her dying father. As she waited she weaved a knot from rushes. Her father noticed and asked her what she was doing. She explained how each loop although individual is not able to be separated from the whole just as their relationship was interwoven so too were they wrapped up with those who would follow in the life after.

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