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Zak Edwards
Poems
Apr 2012
The Best of Spinning
I can hear your voice,
so clearly in my head,
words like bells ringing once again,
and sitting still I spin
Madness lies, cold and
lonely, in my bed, in my head,
waiting for the sun to rise
on jaded, hazy eyes
Remembered cries,
remembered lies,
it's no surprise that
forever fell short again
Another empty night
spent looking for old friends
in darkened bottles'
bottom ends
Whoever knew?
life can be so hollow
I guess it's true, nothing
comes close to me and you
Even though, I don't know
which way I want to go,
just wait around, I'm certain
I'll come back to you again
this is just a rough draft, it definitely needs something more, I'm just not sure what yet. constructive criticism is always appreciated!
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