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Saturday Afternoon Rain

by david-swinden

She listened to the Saturday afternoon rain Dreading her broken heart would remain Her love was cast into the darkest of nights Like a flower starved of nourishment with no light The pain was true you could see it in her eyes Trying to hide emotions her face couldn't disguise Into her life walked a man with a different personality Wanting to show her how true love should be But she needed sometime she was scared it would be the same Dreading her past emotional turmoil, herself she blamed But his hands soothed her bringing her peace and serenity And slowly with time, maybe true love she could see She remembers her previous partner beat her with his fists Now a real lover soothes her with the tenderest kiss And all the scars and tears her previous had left behind Now immersed in true love she thought she would never find And after all the cheating and lies her previous partner would do Now all she hears are words of undying love “I will always love you” She needed his love and he cared honestly and sincerely He could see the pain in her eyes and that she suffered deeply He only wanted true love and to heal the pain she felt And that eventually in his arms her heart would finally melt He would wait forever healing the scars that remain Together lovingly watching the Saturday afternoon rain Happy endings do happen. This was my first post on Hello poetry when I joined up here. 24/11/14 David Swinden
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