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Mar 2017
venus has an off week

(and everything goes to ****)

and you ruin the (white) dress

lay in the shadow of what it was

grow uglier, weaker without it

stop bathing,

eating,

sleeping,

((don't leave home for a week (for days)))

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venus stops moving forward (gets cold feet)

and you ruin the white dress

lay in the shadow of what it was

grow uglier, weaker without it

stop bathing, (don’t bathe)

eating, (eat)

sleeping (sleep)

don't leave home (for a week) (or leave home for a week)

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venus gets cold feet

and you ruin the dress

lay in the shadow of what it was

grow uglier, weaker without it

don’t bathe
eat

sleep

leave home for a week
Written by
Keenon Brice  Baltimore
(Baltimore)   
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