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Would it be weird to ask to hold your hand?

by stoop-kid

You are urban delight, New York debonair, and you don't need to be grandeur to set a trend or flutter a heart; not when you brush your thumb against the beard you maintain with apple-pie order, and quickly flash your howlite teeth with such modesty, that man has to stop and wonder if it's really true that the most endearing, do not have a notion of how sublime they are. and I love how the sun still catches itself upon your burnished, rust-painted locks, slicked back and parted, careful not to hide a single fleck of the honey-gold scattered in the jade of your eyes that still flicker warmly, even when we're passing under the shadows of the skyscrapers that try to swallow us whole with 8th Avenue. take me to Amorino, let me fix the collar of your shirt while you order me a lemon gelato, and I'll tell you on the walk to the carousel on Pier 62 how it's all your fault that my cheeks have been matching the pink of your shirt since the afternoon- and you don't even realize you're doing that to me, but I love it as much as I love reminding you of the reasons that I could think to adore you, because that just happens to be one of them. And the other is because I would love to.
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stoop-kid
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Written by
stoop-kid
American
Published
Mar 22, 2017
Time
3m
Notes

I told a friend of mine I would write him a love poem as a testament to how wonderful he is. Since he loves poetry and, frankly, is the perfect muse for any hopeless romantic of a poet, I took advantage of the inspiration.

Like the majority of my poems, the title for this poem came to me last. Reading over the poem and immersing myself in the imagery, I just came to this one instance in all the daydreaming where I imagined myself asking that question during the walk to Pier 62.

It's such an awkward thing to ask, to hold someone's hand; most people kinda just pick up or make the cues and do it. I think that's why the title stuck, because I can be such a hesitant, bumbling and clumsy person, especially when I am smitten. Yet, I'd like to think a moment like that, when you're all starry-eyed and mixed with shyness and eagerness, holds that beautifully awkward, awkwardly beautiful sweetness to it.

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#love#life#romance#personal#smitten#gelato
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