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Apr 2012
I just wish someone would care
Or put on a smile and pretend.
Because sometimes it just gets hard
To fight for myself: To defend.
I just wish somethings could change
Or maybe this whole thing could end.
I really need someone to help
Or maybe I just really need a friend.
So, can I get input on the four-line rhyme? Should I keep it with 4 rhyming words or change the last lines to make it work better?
Cameron Godfrey
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