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#DestinyFAIL

by atoosa-kourosh

You don't even know you failed your spiritual test? Treated me like one of your side projects –  left unfinished You were surprised to find my self worth undiminished You only devalued yourself and now your charade is finished So take off on some other vision quest You'll never even see how much you were blessed Given so much more than you deserve You could've had it all if you'd found the nerve To keep the true course instead of swerve Break promises and pretend you've done your best Tore open my eyes and showed me you're no better than the rest Just another coward claiming to be strong And you proved to me that my heart was wrong For my fire in your cold world cannot belong You're not the hero I deserve and I won't settle for less!
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Written by
atoosa-kourosh
Published
Feb 27, 2017
Time
2m
Notes

#IntuitionFAIL (I should have heard some alarms, right? Maybe love is deaf as well as blind....)

Free Will overrides destiny

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#love#heartbreak#promises#broken#fire#betrayal#hero#coward#destiny
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