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45 to Life

by @jarjarrhine

You wouldn’t let my feet touch ground until side A died out and the pirouette ceased. We laid there in our Analog Atlantis staring beyond the ceiling letting the soundscape crash over us and cascade into auricular orifices. Our bodies lifted from the mattress, floating up and up— past the ceiling, past the trees, past the planes and clouds, past the stars and planets— into the ether we fantasize about in our synchronized dreams. Til the sound waves receded, and our bodies washed up along the shore, our contours molding into impressionable sand, turning our gaze to one another— the needle lifts from the wax and returns to rest, the platter ceases its cycle, the speakers die— and instead of feet touching ground, I flipped over to side B.
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jarjarrhine
24 / M
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Written by
jarjarrhine
24 / M
Published
Feb 9, 2017
Time
2m
Tags
#love#bed#listen#music#escape#water#waves#record#vinyl#soundscape
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