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Two Voices

I wonder if I can write a poem with two voices? Don’t know mate, maybe you can. Who the hell are you? I’m your second voice, you muppet. Ah. But will they be able to tell? Well, skim readers might miss it. Oh. But if they read “vocally” like you do, It should be okay. What, even when I go Onto a new line? Reckon so, just about. In any case, Some websites will format it differently, But we’ll get away with it. Is it still poetry though? Could be, mate. Really? Well, it depends on the wording I guess. So we need some flowery language? Yes, like the dogs of war are gathering, As two adversaries square up, For gladiatorial combat. MMM. Well, I’d prefer to write things like: The sun is streaming over snow-capped mountains, To greet the summer As we awaken from our wintry slumbers. That’s okay too mate: it’s all poetry. But should I really be seen, Talking to myself? They know you’re mad already, friend, No worries there. That’s okay then: Let’s get this thing posted. Yes, go ahead. Paul Butters
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Jan 21, 2017
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