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Breathless

By chance we sat close that night as the light

faded, leaving that just-before-rain spirit

pervading the air with nature's answer

to expectations of brilliant designs

soon to fill the heavens with their display

of ruthless radiance fused with honor,

 

and when the first boom crashed, then you honored

the hot pursuing trail of blazing light

by squealing with delight in a display

of faux-female mystique while the spirits

of that just-so spot atop your head, designed

to muddle my mind, silently answered

 

longings I felt when your eyes sought answers

to my quick withdrawal-- No, I honor

you too much to indulge secret designs--

but the fury of sound melted the light

nascent in dark orbs as we tasted spirits

of sulfur from the forgotten display's

 

willful efforts to prune our own display--

happy intrusions ordained to answer

pride bursting from our bodies' caged spirits--

national prompts calling, Present! Honor

the ones privileged to die for the light

reflected deep in the inner design

 

of her still questioning eyes designed

in palpable deference to displays

emasculate now in the lessened light,

overcome by the thickened smoke-answer

overflowing our lungs with no honor

for imagined sanctities of spirit,

 

and then the sky tore, releasing spirits

in sudden gallons naturally designed

to drown mystical visions in honor

of reality, the potent display

inherent in terrestrial answers--

non-reflective of superior light.

 

when introspection answers to design,

when spirit surpasses worldly light,

then displays of honor must burst their forms;

 

must give way to neck-chilling encounters

with an intangible, marvelous truth.

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Mar 20, 2012
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