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SZ
Poems
Jan 2017
Close enough
I just wanted you to know
I never had any desire
to take care of another living thing
until you laid your head in my lap.
I never got the chance to tell you
I believed heaven to be the sound
of your breathing as you fell asleep,
so I told him instead.
It wasn't quite the same,
but I guess it was close enough.
#love
#heartbreak
#desire
#sleep
#loss
#heaven
#breathing
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