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Mar 2012
I wish
I could
Fix it
Be your prince
You my princess
But i know it's
No use right now
But that doesnt stop me from
wishing, wanting, waiting, hoping, hurting, hating
to make all our promises a reality
for you to stop pretending that youre over this
for things to change but doubting  
that they can
because they haven't
but i can't change it
This will probably take several edits to get right. any feedback will be appreciated.
each word in the comma separated line corresponds to the same line past it. also they can all be taken to correspond to every line past them. which adds quite a bit more of meaning
Joseph the Dreamer
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Joseph the Dreamer  clarkston ga
(clarkston ga)   
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