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untitled sonnet 1

Have you ever felt your body is a cage? And that the world is your prison? That from the rising of your age Your life's value has not once risen? Fighting thought, resisting existing's cage And ascertain your ambitions becomes moral outrage So to keep yourself safe you keep your words from the page And declare yourself nothing, so as to act nothing on the stage If this is true for you, then I pity thee Much as I solipsistically feel pity for me buti mean this not condescendingly I mean it sympathetically, perhaps more empathetically For I too have felt the same, all the time somehow But shift from it, with tenacity, and free yourself now.
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This is my first attempt using the petrarchan form, ofcourse I have varied the rhyme sceme but stuck to the octave and sestet, and the couplet on the end, lemme know what you think guys

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