It was on that day the world changed I realized that humans were insane The day I realized people **** That people cheat others of their own will
The sky was sunny and clear of grey As my heart was clouded with a darkening haze I looked for someone to tell me I was wrong Just to find everyone knew all along
I whispered shakily to myself How could I have been fooling myself? This is not a paradise A utopia for all Just an insane world Not for one, but all
I hear the dead screaming Their ends were brought in vain Children weeping sorrowfully In the pouring rain
The homeless slowly dying Their ashes spread to the wind No one can save them now No one here can win
I see the mourning faces Those who bemoan the lost Their hearts shattered and broken They payed the ultimate cost
I have no more to say I have no more time to run I must accept the truth This world is meant to rot
Anyone know how I can improve this? I know the ending is abrupt and it makes me so upset I don't have any ideas to make this poem better. It has so much potential and I kind of just....butchered it. So...looking for tips if anyone would be kind enough to take the time andΒ Β give me any. Thanks.