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wild chickens and toothless sisters

the place was dirty dirty like only the South can be i was drinking bud lights drinking the daylight away drinking the outside, and the noise, and the heat away. i was sitting amongst several gray-haired men and i knew i didn't belong, but they didn't seem to know, or care. they had toothless sisters living in trailerparks in Alabama they had sons they had not talked to in years most had seen war and death and destruction. "vietnam!" yelled a man in the corner, and threw his prosthetic leg on the table the men nodded their heads, and mumbled in secret agreement. they were all missing some body-part or another i guess that's what made them whole. outside, wild chickens were roaming the dusty parking lot, pecking on cigarette-butts and empty beer-cans. we laughed, we drank, and we hid our tears and as the bar closed down, Patsy Cline was singing from the jukebox or maybe that's just how i want to remember it. "i'll be damned if this ain't the greatest nation on the planet" i said and they all agreed. then we stumbled out into the night a night filled with crickets and fire-flies and the occasional fist-fight all in all it was a fine night. one for the record books.
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Feb 25, 2012
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