detatch and remove the emotion and pathos from the poem. and put into logos everything "the author wrote this because of that" in simple cause and effect. Detatch because apathy conveyed comes clinical, clerical cold. Passion conveyed comes heated detatch prove the pragmatic practicals provide as emotions can
i think i was getting frustrated with how my emotions kind of bled into everything im writing because it led everything i write to be me-centric and then this kind of spilled out but it's pretty awful.