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Sep 2016
detatch
and remove the
emotion and pathos
from the poem.
and put into logos everything
"the author wrote this because of that"
in simple cause and effect.
Detatch because apathy conveyed
comes clinical, clerical cold.
Passion conveyed comes
heated
detatch
prove the pragmatic practicals provide
as emotions can
i think i was getting frustrated with how my emotions kind of bled into everything im writing because it led everything i write to be me-centric and then this kind of spilled out but it's pretty awful.
Damien Ko
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