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phasia #1

by effieebbtide

david bowie sang space oddity in two different channels: one high pitched on the left side and one low pitched on the right side. the result is more harmonious than a poptart flying out of a toaster oven. the advertisements for poptarts always show gooey goodness in the middle when in reality it's crumbly crap. why is the word "crap" more acceptable than "shit?" why are profanities on a spectrum, and not just this black/white state of good/bad? is it better that way? maybe i'm rambling at this point; maybe i'm more incomprehensible than conceptual art. either way, i am an either/or blank anti-yes? how many question marks finish this sentence???
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19 / Transfeminine
Published
Sep 6, 2016
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#what#incomprehensible#phasia
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