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Unnoticed

I do not know what I see, Fog clutters my mind making breathing hardly a thing. There is this deep sinking feeling; It and the pain will never fade As each day passes, I feel as though time has stopped ticking Will anyone notice as I drown in my fears, Praying this is all just a dream? Will anyone notice as my wounds get deeper And thicken my life with error Mistakes too long repeated, There is no going back But still I sit and stare, Waiting for your familiar face To walk back through that door Never will I adjust to the fact That you are not coming back You left us too soon Without any reason Now I'm losing time, I'm losing my mind Will anyone notice?
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rachel-gonzalez
Swedish
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Jan 24, 2012
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