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Contained shadow pt.2

"BTL crash" You don't remember entering the building, but its shaking and this dancefloor is now your life in binding. Every last one of your senses is bombarded, a kaleidoscope a hyper travel through your present and your future. Colors endlessly shifting, space and time distorted, you can feel its grip on your arm, a sour tasting pill. A wayward thing, just like her perfume, a pure sense Hundreds of them reminding you that they are now someone else. It cannot be for long however, for the stars are aligned, this is the only hour of your life, the best one presented. A familiar scent strikes you and the colors bleed from the scene, They form a river of blood red path through your eyes. As the beat picks up you feel your thoughts drifting, you can see your mind, your tongue twisting. The words are formed but they unintelligible, no matter for she is the only one, always so understanding. You are loved and you two are inseperable yet again. A bastion among the unknown crowd, a familiar face to trust. You feel the short burst of joy course through your veins, but short as it is, it ends with the beat's last blast You come crashing down, sudden and fast, Every dancer now moves in unison, the lights can talk, You hug her tight, but still feel the force applied The lungs melt, the muscles tighten, you lose control. You come crashing down, painful and hopeless, Every shape loses its composure as you fall through life. Her voice is not with you anymore, the stars are supernovas. You fall alone among the crowd, and you hit a grime covered ground.
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domonyi-akos
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domonyi-akos
25 / M
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May 10, 2016
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