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Eddy

*I'm stuck in this eddy. And I'm such a poor swimmer.* I get swirled around. Like a little helpless fly caught in a wineglass. Unbeknownst to the drinker. *I'm stuck in this eddy. And I'm such a poor thinker.* I allow my mind to get swashed around... Like a lone sock in the washing machine. Lost without its other. *I'm stuck in this eddy. And I'm such a poor survivor.* So I just submit to the will of the currents. Like an empty bottle. Stuck head down at the neck, in the bathroom floor trap. Sink or float... I can do neither.
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ryn
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May 9, 2016
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#hellopoetry107#eddy#currentstateofaffairs
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