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Frozen

I stood there

frozen with societal protocol

doubt

and, of course,

indecision.

The artificial candle flicker

of the subway windows

illuminated my eyes

as I stared into the car

looking for

an assured lost cause.

But there you were–

all softness and light

contrasting with the

harsh cold

I stood in

frozen while your subway

passed.

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