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Orange Velvet Sunset Feelings

This is a Deep poem.

The sound of it resonates in your Soul.

 

You can tell it's deep for a couple of reasons:

 

random words are Capitalized and they shouldn't be and it's weird.

 

I use words like cacophony and Endless.

 

I talk about things like Conformity and Pain and Myself.

Can't figure out why that word is italicized?  I can't either.

 

I look at the problems of Society and say "I am going to talk about you so hard right now."

 

The title of it is confusing and you are trying to figure out "Why?  That literally has nothing to do with anything in the poem." And I laugh.  Marvel at the deepness.

 

Some stanzas are

            weirdly

                                                        shaped

but it's all just part of the

                       poem's

meaning.

In the moment of silence after reading think about this poem and

how RAW

how REAL

how EMOTIONAL

it is.  

 

Everything necessary for a deep poem is in here.

This is a deep Poem.  Just trust me.

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sam-schedler
American
Published
Jan 9, 2012
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