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Man on the 1711

He got on, I think, at the first stop

I hardly noticed him at first.

Another passenger, another journey

Another person trying to get on further in the world

But something caught my eye. Was it his looks?

Perhaps, he was handsome, yes

But the type of handsome in an antique

That must be handled and cared for in sterile fashion.

 

"Tickets please,"  belches the scratchy tannoy of the carriage

As a red faced man in a deep hue of navy bumbles along the aisle.

He presents him any papers on his person

And looks at me with a stupid grin

His old eyes of the deep trenches at sea, glisten

There’s still life in the old boy yet.

Impatience wins this round. His hands still fumble helplessly

Through the sheets; not frailed though, just tired.

 

Time passes, he daren't say a word

And looks outside, without a sound. Time doesn't worry him

It's treated him well. Or has it?

As he paws his ginger mane

The grey strands shine in the light

A paper sits unread, unloved beside him

Lights of distant towns blur past

As he stares, unflinching, into the distance.

 

Grunting and shrieking of rails let us know we're stopping

The muddy blue pools shimmer as he rises.

The blade from Cherryvalley assures us that yes,

Yes. This is Lisburn alright. Getting up, sniffing the air

Where nature is a predator, he heaves his dark blue tote bag

Over his shoulder with a grunt.

Roaming into the darkness of the late winter night

Climbing. Climbing. Gone.

 

I sometimes look into the windows of the 1802

at the lights; look at my reflection

Where is he now? Is he like a stray

a lone nocturnal animal, finding his way

Or did he give up? Did he finally reach his den?

And what will become of me? Time tells, I suppose

It always does. I ruffle my auburn hair

Oily, not greying. Scruff, not mane. Still tamed.

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Sep 13, 2012
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