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The Bottle

I won't drink again till Friday she assures him

-but she does  

 

She sits with clouded judgement

bottle and promise

and clouded heart

bottle and promise and empty words.

 

Should it be this hard? - It shouldn't be this hard...

 

He sees her rise, get up with a sigh and leave only to come back with more;

 more empty words

 more empty promises

 more soon to be empty bottles

 

 

She tells him of times gone by,

of times lost,

of loves past and

of the dreams she had.

She tells him how they were shattered,

obliterated in a

drunken moment,

and of how it has made her 'oh so mad'.

 

She tells him how

her lover left her when he heard,

almost five short years before

how she never got to choose her life,

all because the ****** tore.

 

and he's forced to hear it all once more;

and she sits with clouded judgement

bottle and promise

and clouded heart

bottle and promise and empty words

 

He's heard it all before

even if he is only

the tender age

of four.

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Written by
rachel-s
Irish
Published
Dec 30, 2011
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