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Apr 2016
Theirs not a day that goes bye, that I find it hard not to cry.
It's because my heart I gave to you, you chose to give it, up over an issue.
And all this pain I feel is in response, to my love I gave you, you do not want.
Now a feeling of emptiness is inside, I begin to wonder, should I live or should I die.
Mistakes are made it's easy to see, it's when we close our eyes, we cannot be
It's about feelings of utter loss and devastation with dealing with the end of a relationship. My last verse has a double meaning for the reader. Firstly it can refer to making a mistake of taking ones life and secondly the mistake can be not having our eyes open to the reality of the mistakes we make in causing the break ups
Philip Shepherd
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Philip Shepherd  UK
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