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by philip-shepherd

Theirs not a day that goes bye, that I find it hard not to cry. It's because my heart I gave to you, you chose to give it, up over an issue. And all this pain I feel is in response, to my love I gave you, you do not want. Now a feeling of emptiness is inside, I begin to wonder, should I live or should I die. Mistakes are made it's easy to see, it's when we close our eyes, we cannot be
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philip-shepherd
UK
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Written by
philip-shepherd
UK
Published
Apr 11, 2016
Time
1m
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It's about feelings of utter loss and devastation with dealing with the end of a relationship. My last verse has a double meaning for the reader. Firstly it can refer to making a mistake of taking ones life and secondly the mistake can be not having our eyes open to the reality of the mistakes we make in causing the break ups

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