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Fields of Fallen Memories

They say time is like a river; Flowing on forever, with not a glance behind. No second passes taken, but left are remnants within the mind - For here I walk in a field of dreams, among rose-colored grasses; Pink-painted petals cascade from trees like amaranth, fancied and eternal - Soft and silken, they rain like ashes; and they whisper to me sweetly. Through the haze of time, I hear the voices of the fallen, And the laughter of bygone days; This lea lit by vernal skies, it is a lachrymose place - Beautifully bittersweet, and with life interwoven.
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EveEstelle
Published
Mar 29, 2016
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Would love to hear any improvements that you think could be made! :) Especially to the last few lines (not sure "with life interwoven" works as well as I'd like).

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#memories#past#thoughts#bittersweet
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