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Deep Down

(In a minor key)

 

Deep down, way down below

It's hard to see it all go

You know time passes

And still people die

Fighting the war that ended

So long ago

Deep Down

 

It's a world that's hurting

A world full of pain

lord lord

It's hard to catch the joy

And just be alive

Deep Down

 

So now it's just you

And now it's just me

We touch each other

And we're still free

Deep Down

Way down below

So hard to see it all go

Deep Down

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Written by
gary-gibbens
Canadian
Published
Dec 21, 2011
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