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Ask Before You Fall in Love

He came to me A shining man Metallic swords And endless chance Paddling white horse A silhouette in the beating sun Golden rays brushing his shining sleeves A dream unable to he undone He offered his hand, And off we danced Twirling in the setting sunlight Dipping and leading into the nights ascent Under the sweet navy sky Freckled with quivering white stars In between the dark shadow trees I fell in love, so hard and so high Follows a morning sun A valley of color and life Noise, and time and sense resume The perfect lovers day But looking over On the sweet sweet grass He is not lying at the end of my love He is walking to his mule Wearing tattered clothing His sword a gnarled rotting stick Anything but shine Anything but charm "You are not my Prince" I say to him "I never said I was"
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Written by
bri-cavinar
Published
Feb 18, 2016
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#love#heartbreak#reveal#assumption
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