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Zach Gomes
Poems
Feb 2010
Ideal Poem
Amid the white notebooks dotting my desk
hides a half-drawn sketch
laying down some image of an ideal poem.
It sits incomplete, but the plans I made
surface to my vision—
a sturdy poem of stubborn build,
words, pliant, sad, and simple
deft-attached, vine-like wrapped
around bamboo scaffolds astride black steel framing.
Dangling from two pinched fingers,
the sketch has yet to display
its mid-sized trees (for scale)
and the few more floors envisioned.
It could house with ease
a teeming, drunken mass
of patients with a fear of heights
and post-traumatic stress.
The burn of my popped lighter
curves over the paper plane where the grassy lot’s drawn,
where my hired architect would stand
and plan the façade, no windows.
His blueprints would radiate the math
of symmetric perfection
found symbolic of its New-Age form.
Designers would be flown in
from around the world,
contractors would be called.
And the sheer simplicity of it all
would test their expertise
challenged at last by the spire and final stanza
which, if drawn, would only now
be caught up by the flame
casually ribboned across the page.
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Zach Gomes
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