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A Peaceful Winter Breeze

They sat Together on the porch with Their hot chocolate now beginning to chill He had so much to tell Her how He felt how He saw Her how much She mattered to Him He was so embarrassed to share His feelings He was even worried as to how HIs breath made clouds in the cold air Hers were not as noticable there were many things keeping Them apart the slight mount of snow building between Them the frigidness of the cold air and the secrets the secrets hanging around Him like the halo of the snow angel She had made earlier that night the love He had for Her as refreshing as the cool air against Her soft cheeks yet He was afraid of it He took Her hand in his stared Her in the eye and gathered His courage then She said "I Love You"
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Written by
StoutOfOrder
29 / M / American
For You?
Written by
StoutOfOrder
29 / M / American
Published
Nov 28, 2011
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33·147
Notes

Not to sound full of myself, but I really like what I did with the capitalization in this poem. It might not be the strongest thing I've ever written, but I still like it quite a bit for this reason.

2006 - Creative Writing high school class

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