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Jan 2016
“WOUND”

Tool roughly sows force…

Searing flesh calls out like babe…

Like babe, flesh is nursed.

“HEALING”

Time gently sews wound…

Body, like God over germs…

Fools they are, or were.

“SCAR”

Fate has sealed breach…

Man reaps good of ill matters…

Proof of battle fades.
A post from my blog, and my favorite haiku story of the bunch.
It's interesting how using the fewest words paints a "clearer" picture.
Yet, one must know that the picture is not so much "clearer" as is it "being imagined" whereas, a description with more information is "directing you."

It's an interesting experiment of the mind and an important lesson in writing, one that Ernest Hemingway would be proud of: communicating with as little information as possible is powerful.

However, it takes vision. A deep understanding of writing and a deep understanding of people.
If you've been writing and living for long enough, you'll understand that knowing people and knowing writing are inseparable facts of life.

Happy New Year! :)
Darren Edsel Wilson
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