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27 Right?

Oh, I can see your eyes

 

Searching out across this silent room

 

Looking close by for someone

 

That may understand you

 

Oh, I can feel your eyes

 

Peering over every secret spot of my body

 

Needing to be moved by someone else lately

 

Can you see my eyes?

 

These eyes of a blackened mind

 

Wandering, lost somewhere in time

 

Can you feel my eyes?

 

Tearing off each thread of cloth

 

From your body of gold

 

To the earth from the stars

 

You are reeling in this love

 

You are pulling at this heart

 

 

Love,

 

 

I wonder if they can see our eyes…

 

Giving each other time,

 

To admire the smiles given in between

 

You left so fast I had no time to speak

 

My words all left so fast

 

Just so that you wouldn’t leave

 

Don’t fall away from me

 

Please fly away

 

 

Amazing,

 

 

I won’t lose you again.

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Written by
andrew-mcelroy
30 / M / Australian
Published
Nov 18, 2011
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