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and after

i open my brothers door

silver hinges creak against white wood

earlier today a girl broke his heart

or what was left of it

 

Hey. (i say)

Hi. (he says)

Are you okay? (i ask, stepping forward, breathing in)

Yes. (he does not seem like he is lying)

Are you sad?

Yes.

Do you need a hug?

No. (he is lying now but i let it go this time)

Okay. (i don't hug him)

Okay. (he turns away)

Goodnight. (i love you)

Goodnight. (i love you too)

 

softly the silver hinges let the white door click

into place in the white doorframe in the white hallway

in the neat white house on the snow covered hill

where a feeling like sin seeps through all the white cracks

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ellie-stelter
American
Published
Nov 15, 2011
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