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Nov 2011
The emptiness hurts

Like a brain freeze
and a sunburn
and sand in your eyes
and a sore throat
and stubbing your toe
and a kick in the *****

all at once.

Today I want to chop up love.
This poem was written as a contribution to the Adopt a Metaphor experiment. The metaphor adopted here was "chop up love".
Ellis Reyes
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Ellis Reyes  M/USA
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