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Sonnet of Imperfections

by ChupaJade

This point of time will be forever kept Inside my mind, forever and a day: Your greasy hair dragged cruelly by the wind. Your mountainous nose, that gets in the way. You do not speak the way you really should; You speak the same as an old foreign man. You hide dry skin beneath that tired blue hood - To be with you would be no sane man's plan. You're not a pretty sight which is a same You shall never be a beautiful dame But, oh, I love you, darling, all the same. Your imperfections make you who you are: A shining star not seen is still a star.
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Written by
ChupaJade
26 / F
For You?
Written by
ChupaJade
26 / F
Published
Nov 10, 2015
Time
2m
Notes

Inspired by Shakespeares sonnets! This sonnet is only 13 lines long, rather than the traditional 14 lines, just to make it as imperfect as the lady the poem is supposedly about, little differences to a traditional sonnet have been made, such as the 13 lines and some of these lines are not the traditional 10 syllables long.

I hope you enjoy reading just as much as i did writing it, ENJOY!

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#love#poetry#you#imperfection#imperfect#individuality#shakespeare
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