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Love Fool

by ryn

. **    |                                       |                                              |     |                                       |                                              |     |                                       |                                              |      |                                    •arches                                      |      |                                 up top bef-                                   |    |                               ore tapering                                   |    |                                   down to                                      |    |                                       the                                           |     |                                                                                     ooo        |                   ooo    bottom•a sym-      ooooo         ooo    o    |              oooo    bol that holds my en-     oooo      ooo |       oooo        tirety for ransom•a hos-      oooooo   |   ooo              tage situation that made          ooo     ooo                   me so willing•truss me                         ooo              up, bound...  i am not                       oo            fighting•call this in-                         oo            sensibility... name                          ooo                  this foolery•i am                       ... but a branch dangling off |                           a  tree•                            |   |                call                           thus            |   |           me   an                        i   am           |   |          idiot... la-                 the doll,          |     |            bel  me a              from  oth-         |     |            nitwit•for          ers, set far          |     |                i only                    apart•           |     |     have my                             i am the     |     | strings...                                      marione-     i am but                                             tte who's a limp                                                        after pup-                                              your      pet•                                         heart•** .
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ryn
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Written by
ryn
Published
Dec 12, 2015
Time
2m
Notes

By far the toughest concrete poem I have ever attempted!

Concrete Poem 29 of 30

Tap on the hashtag "30daysofconcrete" below to view more offerings in the series. :)

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