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by dchin

Everyday we go through Heaven and Hell. It's a constant battle: Good versus Evil. We go through so much Pain and Heartbreak, Joy and Excitement But we're overwhelmed. For every positive feeling, There's a negative feeling. For some of us, that Negative becomes too powerful. We become flooded by all The could've, should've, would've, The maybes and what ifs. We forget the little things. We lose our friends, but Depression and Anxiety. We feel dark and cold inside And we isolate ourselves. Don't get too close to us Because we're contagious! Every second we fade Deeper into our minds. We want the world to Stop so we can relax And clear our minds But it just spins faster. We become so overwhelmed By negativity that we push Those close to us further Because we don't want to hurt them. Our minds become a whirlpool, A black hole, pulling us Down faster and further And there is no escape. The only way to stop this, In our heads, is to say "The end" Maybe then it will end. But it doesn't have to end. As writers of our lives, We can end it Or we can pause. We can end it with An "!", "?", or "." But instead let's pause with A semicolon. A semicolon let us Breathe and gather our thoughts. It tells everyone that It's not over yet; just paused. As writers of our lives, Pause and rethink our decision Because our stories are not over yet; There's so much more left. Regret nothing from our past. Rethink no decisions made Or decisions that we didn't make. Live in the now and for the future. We owe it to our friends, To our families, and Most importantly to ourselves To not end but pause. We all crash and burn, and That could be the end but We can be the Phoenix and rise From the ashes stronger and better. There are times when I Felt like giving up and saying The end, but I remember My friends and family and the good times. I could've ended my story Making it into a tragedy But instead of ending every sentence, I paused and carried on. My story isn't over yet Because there are no much That I want to do in life: Medical school, marriage, kids. My story is not complete And I don't want to Leave a cliffhanger for My friends, family, everyone. Out stories are not over yet. We have so much to live for. We have so many goals: Graduation, Job, Love. Insp;re each other and Everyone going through the same thing. Be the warr;ors we are determined to be And f;ght hard like your life depends on it. **Insp;re! Be a warr;or! F;ght on!** Our stories are not over yet. Robert Frost said, "Two roads diverged in a yellow wood." We have two choices. Pick carefully; it'll make all the difference. Pick left and end your story With an "!", "?", or "." Or pick right and pause Your story with a semicolon. **Insp;re! Be a warr;or! F;ght on! Our stories are not over yet;**
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dchin
29 / M / American
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Written by
dchin
29 / M / American
Published
Nov 4, 2015
Time
6m
Notes

In memory of those who committed suicide.

To those who have thought about suicide or hurting yourself, have hurt yourself, and/or are suffering from mental illness, know that there are people here who will listen and talk to you. Know that you are not alone.

If you or someone you know have thought or are thinking about suicide, please call the National Suicide Prevention Hotline at 1-800-273-TALK (8255). Someone is available 24/7.

This poem was inspired by Project Semicolon (www.projectsemicolon.org).

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