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maintain faithfulness

one finger grips your life, and your teeth grind together, like the stone below, grating. inside your heart the head is beating, screaming to stay together. but your green eyes, they slip to the right and down, "dont look, please baby." I know you'll do it anyways because they truly were my downfall. and you exhale slowly, the sight of death so close. his warm breath, turns your cheeks pink and your eyelashes flutter. A final smile spashes your face, the finger slips and you let go. the black whole sucks me in, sickly sweet it feels. "The faithful will always wait." the sentence you whispered, in your death, to me. tightened my face, it stopped my heart. it made me miss you and leave you in one fell sweep. but I wait for you in faithfulness.
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Written by
courtney-dougal
American
Published
Nov 3, 2011
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29·137
Notes

this came from a Hello Poetry experiment called adopt a metaphor. Adopting a metaphor can take you in so many directions, I hope you like the road I traveled.

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