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Trembling

Your heart beats in my chest, My heart bares your name. This feeling burning hot inside me, We can never be the same. This chemical reaction, Has left me naked and scared, But your arms clothe me, And your kiss repairs. Every broken part of me, That I kept hidden away; Scared if you saw my gnarled insides, You’d be disgusted by the decay. Yet you remain, like a vice, Holding me together. Keeping me solid and warm, Through the coldest of weather. Our souls are now entwined, And in the quiet I hear you heart. I know it would break me, If we were ever ripped apart. This feeling leaves me trembling, But you brush away my fears. With a single look, a single kiss, You can stop all my tears. With your heart beating in mine, And your lips kissing my name, And my flesh burning against yours, I know I’ll never be the same.
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Written by
Rylierose
30 / Gender Fluid / American
For You?
Written by
Rylierose
30 / Gender Fluid / American
Published
Oct 26, 2011
Lines·Words
28·157
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I just wrote this poem, and I would very much appreciate some peer review and editing. There's still some parts that sounds iffy to me. Compliments and constructive criticism are very much welcome.

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